I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Friday, March 20, 2020
Wednesday, March 18, 2020
Kawa of Care Assembly - Draft writing
WALT understand the 'Kawa of care. WALT write a recount about our assembly experience.
Check out my draft writing ...
It was almost time for our assembly. We had been standing outside for a little while and finally we heard the starting bit ,Tuva-Lisa spoke then Atama and then Alani then the trailer went on. Finally the music started and we all danced. All of me was nervous .All us Actresses and Actors danced to the front and went behind a board. I was 100 percent happy we had to sit still. It was very annoying!.My favourite act was where Millan,Hori and Kaiora stole Zions,Mihi's and Kodas chromebooks!!!.now it was almost my group's turn I had butterflies in my tummy. Finally it was my group's turn.We went out me,Kaydee and Carrie sat down on the chairs and Lucy stood up.This is what we said Lucy,today we are going to do mathletics.me,Kaydee,Carrie okay.Me hey Carrie hey Kaydee hey Carrie should we go on the cute hamster videos. Kaydee,Carrie yeah go on. Kaydee look the teachers coming go of. Lucy wow girls your great at mathletics go back on to cute hamster videos. Lucy sneaks up Lucy NO NO NO!What on earth are you up to. Lucy what what what shuts chrome books Me, Kaydee and Carrie gasping.
Check out my draft writing ...
It was almost time for our assembly. We had been standing outside for a little while and finally we heard the starting bit ,Tuva-Lisa spoke then Atama and then Alani then the trailer went on. Finally the music started and we all danced. All of me was nervous .All us Actresses and Actors danced to the front and went behind a board. I was 100 percent happy we had to sit still. It was very annoying!.My favourite act was where Millan,Hori and Kaiora stole Zions,Mihi's and Kodas chromebooks!!!.now it was almost my group's turn I had butterflies in my tummy. Finally it was my group's turn.We went out me,Kaydee and Carrie sat down on the chairs and Lucy stood up.This is what we said Lucy,today we are going to do mathletics.me,Kaydee,Carrie okay.Me hey Carrie hey Kaydee hey Carrie should we go on the cute hamster videos. Kaydee,Carrie yeah go on. Kaydee look the teachers coming go of. Lucy wow girls your great at mathletics go back on to cute hamster videos. Lucy sneaks up Lucy NO NO NO!What on earth are you up to. Lucy what what what shuts chrome books Me, Kaydee and Carrie gasping.
Tuesday, March 10, 2020
Wednesday, March 4, 2020
A-Z Water Conservation
WALT find key words related to water conservation.
We are learning to save water because there is a drought and we have water restrictions. This means we have to use less water at the moment because demand is bigger than supply.
We are learning to save water because there is a drought and we have water restrictions. This means we have to use less water at the moment because demand is bigger than supply.
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