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It was almost time for our assembly. We had been standing outside for a little while and finally we heard the starting bit ,Tuva-Lisa spoke then Atama and then Alani then the trailer went on. Finally the music started and we all danced. All of me was nervous .All us Actresses and Actors danced to the front and went behind a board. I was 100 percent happy we had to sit still. It was very annoying!.My favourite act was where Millan,Hori and Kaiora stole Zions,Mihi's and Kodas chromebooks!!!.now it was almost my group's turn I had butterflies in my tummy. Finally it was my group's turn.We went out me,Kaydee and Carrie sat down on the chairs and Lucy stood up.This is what we said Lucy,today we are going to do mathletics.me,Kaydee,Carrie okay.Me hey Carrie hey Kaydee hey Carrie should we go on the cute hamster videos. Kaydee,Carrie yeah go on. Kaydee look the teachers coming go of. Lucy wow girls your great at mathletics go back on to cute hamster videos. Lucy sneaks up Lucy NO NO NO!What on earth are you up to. Lucy what what what shuts chrome books Me, Kaydee and Carrie gasping.
wow grace thats so cool
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