My class has been doing descriptive writing.The thing that I found easy was adding the detail.The thing that I found tricky was writing because I found it hard to keep the writing up.I think the way I can extend myself is putting more describing words.
I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Wednesday, June 24, 2020
Moment in Time
WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.
My class has been doing descriptive writing.The thing that I found easy was adding the detail.The thing that I found tricky was writing because I found it hard to keep the writing up.I think the way I can extend myself is putting more describing words.
My class has been doing descriptive writing.The thing that I found easy was adding the detail.The thing that I found tricky was writing because I found it hard to keep the writing up.I think the way I can extend myself is putting more describing words.
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I really love this piece of writing Grace. Every time I read it, I feel like I am at Coopers Beach eating an ice cream and enjoying my day. You have done an excellent job of creating an image in my mind. WOW! What do you enjoy most when you go to the beach?
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