GB My person

 

1.6.2021 WALT: Describe my person in detail Success Criteria I have checked my writing for: 3 simile Capital letters ,full stops and commas(groups of three) Juicy sentences Sentence starters My Great Grandfather has straight, shiny, blonde and very soft hair just like my Grandfather. His eyes twinkle like the stars on clear nights and makes me feel like he is from the stars themselves . My Great Grandfather's ears stick out like an elfs and sometimes we even think he's one. His smile lights up my world and makes his face all wrinkled so wrinkled his eyes nearly close. My great grandfather has a double chin and when he smiles his chin goes up and when he is sad his chin goes down sort of like my chin. When he frowns it looks sort of like he is going to burst into tears. Great Grandfather is my Great Grandfather from my mum's side of my family. My favorite memory with my Great Grandfather was when we went to a sanctuary in Australia where we got to hold baby ALLIGATORS! We were pretty amazed at it not biting us but that was only the beginning of a fabulous adventure. The first most amazing sight that we went to was a cage that had millions of doors to let hundreds of parrots come and go whenever they wanted. Some of them even came and landed on your thumbs,head and arms to eat bird feed from a dish that you were given that was full of bird seed. Most of the sanctuary was amazing but the crocodile display was super! The oldest croc who was 39 years old, could jump 3-5 metres above the water WOW!!! The scariest animals there were 5 venomous snakes and 5 snakes that would squeeze you to death. You wouldn't be able to even guess how glad I was to see them behind several layers of glass! The last thing that we saw was a pack of kyotes! I thought they were just plain house dogs at my first glance.